[darksun]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yi6fYQTcumo

do you approve? I'm mainly worried about the intro, i know i messed up the verses pretty good.

[Tennessee Jedi]

Yeah man !
You are on to it.
Keep it up and keep practicing.
Loved the solo/two screen thing ....
peace

[Billbbill]

intro is not bad at all - cool camera deal

keep it up

[darksun]

okay, i tweaked it a little

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aQJV8aOf-pQ